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xannacrosszeriax Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  New member
KAWAIIII ~
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maplesyrupbeer Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This story feels so......real. 






I Love it.
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I LOVE your stories!!! They're the best, and give me the feels while others mostly don't! Keep up the great work!
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feraligatrluvr Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
This here is pure, quality work. The best reader insert I have read. I love it so much!
(´;ω;`) ヾ(≧∀≦*)ノ〃
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CheshireNeko247 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay your so epic sauce for putting these links here I just hate it when people don't put links.
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KiWWyke Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
This is the only story I like to read xD it's so amazing, and it's a very good feeling to imagine that I'm there with Arthur XD You're an excellent writer, I can tell ^^
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LariCat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student
*Q* I love this so much!! Thank you for creating such a lovely story!! I'm looking every day after this and if a new chapter's out XD keep writing, Pasta-Chan!!!
\OwO/
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TheFemaleBTT Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
From observing the previous comments I know you probably won't reply to this, let alone read, but just incase, I'll give a bit of feedback.
First off, I love this story. It doesn't have an abstract theme, it doesn't have anything overly extaticly exciting or all that jazz. It's nice and simple, yet enjoyable.
The school theme is way overused, but you've somehow played it off perfectly in this story. You haven't been allowing it to get boring, and it's not eccentric to the point of "wtf" either.
I also love how the relationship between Reader-chan and Arthur is gradually growing, as opposed to love at first sight. If there's one thing I hate, it's love at first sight. You're doin it the right way, bro.
Next, I like how you're portraying Arthur's personality. He doesn't seem like a love struck/lovesick robot only set there for romantic purposes, he's an actual person. You can feel a living interaction between him and the reader.
And lastly... The reader. You've done well at capturing the personality of what would be an average yet special main character in a story. Many humans in high school especially have so much work, see so little time to do it, we procrastinate and we think we all have it the worst. All these qualities are in the reader- she's not a character with an impossible personality, it fits right into a real life scenario. The biggest thing I love is that she's no big hero of any kind with any special skills or great hinderances like most main characters, she is a girl who meets someone who understands how she may feel and is willing to put up with that.

In other words.... I love your story XD keep up the good work, ok? I'm sincerely enjoying the series, and I plan to continue reading it as more comes.
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SherlockedHazza Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconbravoplz: This comments reflects my exact opinion based on this series!
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Wulfengurl Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
You are BY FAR the best Fan Fiction writer I have ever seen!!! I can't WAIT till chapter 14!!!!!!!!!! XD XD XD
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